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take me captive

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more than anything, I fear freedom
One day I will write a book, and I swear this will be the central theme. Our restrictions - self-imposed or otherwise - define us. They helped us make every decision in our lives, so who would we be without them?

I fear I would not be me, and even more than that - I fear I would not care.

As always, I'd love to hear your thoughts/interpretations/suggestions :heart:
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ILuvPetite's avatar
This has such a strong and powerful meaning into such a small sentence. I definitely know how you feel. With so much freedom, we can lose so much. But with such little freedom, we feel protected. That's how I think of it.
Beautiful poem. You will become a great artist with words in the future, I can tell. Love Heart Love Heart Love Heart Love Heart