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We used to lie on blankets of flax
and moonlight, woven thick and tight
with the summer breeze.
I found it hardest to get up those mornings,
when you were everywhere and I was tucked
someplace deep, deep inside.
You must have known; even as I rubbed dreams
and stardust from my eyes you tugged me under,
bound me tighter.
With chamomile still warm and thick
on your soft-palate you whispered
fireflies and freesia into my hair.
Slowly, softly, your dew-drop words
lulled me to sleep again.
and moonlight, woven thick and tight
with the summer breeze.
I found it hardest to get up those mornings,
when you were everywhere and I was tucked
someplace deep, deep inside.
You must have known; even as I rubbed dreams
and stardust from my eyes you tugged me under,
bound me tighter.
With chamomile still warm and thick
on your soft-palate you whispered
fireflies and freesia into my hair.
Slowly, softly, your dew-drop words
lulled me to sleep again.
Literature
princess
hydrogen lungs bound in
galactic ribs are under
cardiac arrest.
we left the moon on repeat,
and the sun died drunk in
the avalanche of night.
but it's alright this time,
because she can always
save herself.
Literature
unarticulated
tonight I ask myself:
where are you going with all these names
in your pockets? syllables that taste
unauthentic in the desperate American
mouth.
repression is a series of images
golden streetlights
blinking
pedantically
earthbound angels breathing
flame, starving hands speaking
in tongues, glazed eyes
asking are you fucking okay
pale skin becoming moonlight,
reflecting and refracting and
the quiet understatement
of listless
lips.
mutual poison.
Literature
Coalescence in (and of) Poetry
Chatoyant stargazer, you with
skin as opulent as spring itself
hair a realm where fairies roam
limbs redolent of riverbed soil
lead me to the illusive seams
of this halcyon of gossamer dreams
over orion and past the eye of god
Grandiloquent desiderata, you are
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A little lighter than my usual work so I'd love some feedback/critique on this one
How so you feel about flow?
And do you think the line breaks are in the right places? (I agonized over that for a while, the lines just didn't want to split)
How so you feel about flow?
And do you think the line breaks are in the right places? (I agonized over that for a while, the lines just didn't want to split)
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I quite like this piece. It's very light, but has a wonderful use of imagery and metaphor.