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Nothing Pure Shall Fade

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Sunshine forever falls
despite night's misty shawl.
Sweet-springs that constant drain
are filled with summer's rain.
And flowers, blooms subdued
from winter's frigid mood,
in spring are quick remade.
Nothing pure shall fade.
A kind-of response poem to Robert Frost's "Nothing Gold Can Stay"
It put me in a melancholy mood earlier and I wanted to write something with a little more hope.

Read each line slowly for best results :D
Critiques are welcome 
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LadyBrookeCelebwen's avatar
Oh, I love the last line. :) It's definitely hopeful.